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10/31/2007 03:23:18 AM |
Critique Club Comment:
Good things:
I like the border. Sometimes borders like that can be a little overpowering but yours does a good job of keeping the colors all nicely tied together.
I like how the Skittles are nicely arranged. You did a good job with lining them up - sometimes even a little bit of mistake here can really throw off the balance and flow of the image.
So-So things:
I like the diagonal composition, but perhaps if you had flipped the image horizontally, it would have led the eye in a more "rainbow" type fashion.
Background - there is not too much of it showing, but where it does, it distracts (just a little) due to the texture.
I agree that you could have put more red and purple in but this doesn't really bother me at all.
Things that could really help the shot:
The colors here are very flat and dull. A levels or curves adjustment would have helped immensely, I think.
Title is maybe not the most original - it's okay, just that when there are other images in the challenge like yours, having such a common slogan just underscores the idea in the voters' minds that this is something we have seen before.
In general, good attention to detail in the setup, and with a bit more careful attention to post-processing this could have been much better I think! |
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10/26/2007 11:16:25 PM |
| Nice colour, I might have enjoyed more of the darker skittles in shot for balance... |
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10/26/2007 06:22:16 PM |
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10/26/2007 02:26:52 PM |
| I just saw a shot like this... |
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10/25/2007 06:18:38 PM |
| A good capture, Nice color and DOF, but I'm not finding anything exceptional in it. |
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10/24/2007 06:00:38 PM |
| where's the rainbow? red and purple are hidden - the photo is so yellow.... |
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10/24/2007 01:07:23 PM |
| Um, your missing blue! Nice idea, would have liked to see more in focus, but thats just me, 6. |
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10/24/2007 03:30:42 AM |
lol thought someone might do this ;-)
nice focussing |
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10/23/2007 07:21:54 PM |
| Wow! How long did that take? |
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10/23/2007 05:22:46 PM |
| nice use of diagonals and good control of focus - really solid image overall 7 |
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10/23/2007 03:24:49 PM |
| little short of a rainbow, good Symmetry 7 |
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10/22/2007 05:38:50 AM |
| Nice enough idea, however the lights are far too harsh on this image. Something also appears to have gone astray with the processing, the orange skittles have strange colour casts. |
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10/22/2007 04:00:15 AM |
| I like it, the composition, colours, DOF are all good. |
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10/22/2007 03:02:47 AM |
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10/21/2007 08:47:33 PM |
| Great setup and DOF. The only thing this shot is missing is a bit of curves to really make this shot explode at the viewer IMHO. Well done. |
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