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10/27/2007 07:14:02 AM |
| I know you can do better than this, because I've seen some of your other work. The whole image seems a bit gray. I think a levels adjustment might help. I like your message. It deserves a bit more effort. |
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10/26/2007 07:32:17 PM |
| I like the idea, but yeah, the lighting and low contrast don't help it. You could use this as a processing exercise - see what you can do about the contrast and sharpness. |
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10/23/2007 05:23:07 AM |
| I don't quite get this --- if you are going for a cigarette feel, I would have added some smoke coming out of the pencil. A bit more contrast would have helped too (the image is a bit flat)and would have made those darks stand out more. |
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10/22/2007 04:54:40 AM |
| Lower ISO and better focus would improve the image |
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10/20/2007 10:44:54 AM |
| I think more contrast is needed to create a more impacting picture.. |
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10/19/2007 11:49:09 PM |
| Probably safer with the graphite. Seems a tad unsharp IMO. |
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10/19/2007 06:59:36 AM |
| your title might go better if you had a cig box in the shot as well. I am assuming that by "cancer stick" you are talking about cigarrettes, but the pencil does not really convey that. |
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10/19/2007 05:19:31 AM |
| Nice idea. Everything falls in the midtones. Would like to see some true blacks and whites. |
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10/18/2007 11:18:43 AM |
| Dull and boring. Is it on a tissue? |
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10/18/2007 08:07:08 AM |
| I don't get the title? Hmmmmmmm Seems oof as well |
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10/18/2007 06:22:40 AM |
| The title is the only thing that is gettng your message accross. |
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10/18/2007 02:36:00 AM |
| I really dig the idea behind this, but the contrast is distractingly flat. |
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10/17/2007 09:17:12 PM |
| I don't quite understand what's the idea behind the image |
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10/17/2007 06:36:06 PM |
| I like your idea. The colors and gray areas seem a little flat to me. Perhaps if there was more contast or if the pencil was in an ash tray, I would have scored it higher. |
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10/17/2007 10:08:28 AM |
| This image really lacks contrast. Making the whites brighter would have helped a lot. |
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10/17/2007 05:53:49 AM |
| Underexposed. Needs more contrast...adjust levels. |
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10/17/2007 05:15:00 AM |
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10/17/2007 12:56:16 AM |
| The lighting is bad. And the whole shot is dull. |
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