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02/17/2004 02:33:14 PM |
| It's ok. Definitely fits the topic, but the girl's face is not expressing the tear on her face. Is she sad, or did she just yawn? |
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02/17/2004 07:23:52 AM |
| IMO this would have benefitted from closer cropping and a little more contrast. |
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02/16/2004 05:21:01 PM |
| I like your composition with the subject being positioned 1/3 of right. |
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02/16/2004 12:58:03 PM |
| good image, dead space bothers me though. maybe good as a vertical with simular cropping on the face? |
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02/15/2004 03:41:08 PM |
incredibly beautiful model.
i like this photo quite a bit.
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02/13/2004 12:17:38 PM |
| The composition is excellent - the sweep of her hair gives a beautiful curve as well as really cutting her off from the black space. And the rich black in her eyes really plays well against that background. Wonderfully evocative. |
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02/12/2004 06:42:03 PM |
| a nicely composed portrait, but pretty dull in the tones. good use of negative space, but the blacks could be darker and the light areas brighter to give this more impact. |
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02/12/2004 02:36:19 PM |
| whoa tha subkect has REALLY nice hair * envies* hehe nice pic (= |
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02/12/2004 01:24:05 PM |
| nice... just composition in my opinion would be better if there was a little less dark space on the left side. |
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02/12/2004 04:50:38 AM |
| Great shot, interesting use of negative space in composition. Her expression says it all. |
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02/11/2004 04:24:38 PM |
| Good capture of emotion. I little noise in the black, but good shot. |
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02/11/2004 03:29:56 PM |
| Good lighting and subject placement. my only suggestion would have been to rub in a bit of corn starch under the eye and on the cheek. It would have made the trail of the tear stand out a lot more. But good none the less, 7! |
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02/11/2004 01:27:39 PM |
| bit too much black background |
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02/11/2004 12:46:46 AM |
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