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02/17/2004 05:59:25 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is an interesting image in that it makes my turn my head and try to figure out what is all there. The focus seems off just a bit, almost as if there was a slight camera shake, a sharper focus would help this image a great deal to me. The cutting off the tires on the left also hurts the image to me.
I do like the black and white use here. Color would have been very distracting. But the itmes hanging on the right are a bit distracting to the shot. Perhaps if you had removed the other objects and turned one of the bikes over to offer some contrast? I like the shot overall just needs a bit of tweaking to me.
Good Luck In Future Challenges!
Deannda
DNeufer@stny.rr.com if you have any questions or want to discuss this further! |
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02/10/2004 03:41:47 PM |
| Creative idea. Maintaining the theme and originality to boot. Good work! |
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02/10/2004 10:22:26 AM |
| Welp, the bikes are certainly off road, no denying that.But the shot feels cluttered and a little hard to follow. Perhaps removing those tolls in the back wold have helping clean up the background. |
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02/06/2004 01:03:56 PM |
| A good idea, but the lighting on the left kills the shot |
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02/04/2004 03:13:47 AM |
| In this challenge you are invited to do an artwork with garage things. This bikes can be an pleasant artwork? |
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02/04/2004 03:04:06 AM |
| Nice bikes! Soft focus creates an interesting mood. |
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