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09/06/2007 06:37:41 AM |
There are some great things about this photo: it is very sharp; the colors are vibrant; the bokeh is nicely done. A few issues: the snake's head is facing away; the tall piece of bark bisects the photo. Suggestions to improve the photo w/out a re-shoot: crop a good portion of left and bottom so snake is more prominent; clone out top 1/2 of bark so bokeh is continuous across the b/g. Hope this is helpful! |
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09/06/2007 06:16:46 AM |
Excellent colors and shallow DOF - but the snake is pointing the wrong way (albeit a safer way!). really nice sharpness in the details on the skin. |
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09/06/2007 05:21:47 AM |
Colours are great, depth of field is nice and the focus on the snakes head is perfect. Unfortunately some interest is lost by not being able to see the snakes 'face' and that bit of bark that obscures part of the snake is a little off-putting. Not sure about the stick either. Overall I like it but it could be vastly improved by waiting for the snake to adopt a more interesting 'pose'.
Hope that helps. |
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09/06/2007 05:04:12 AM |
Color of the snake is beautiful. Also like the patches of light, tough to expose properly with that and you were able to. Unfortunately, the back of the snake's head isn't as interesting as the front. |
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