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09/06/2007 05:55:13 AM |
| I agree and disagree with latentflip. I think the composition could be improved, maybe to see more of the climbers although part of me likes that you can't see them all, leaves me wondering just how many there are... how far they extend beyond my view. Perhaps some post-processing could draw the viewer into the composition more. |
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09/06/2007 05:12:03 AM |
Its a good angle in my opinion but the composition could perhaps be improved: it seems a little right-heavy with that large empty space on the left, and the people falling out of the frame on the right. I would have perhaps pulled back a little and panned right to fit them all in the frame, and opened up that aperture a little to get a slightly shallower depth of field so that the subject becomes one of the people rather than all of them.
I'm rambling now but perhaps also rotating the frame slightly, so that the leading lines of the row of bricks above and below the people intersected at the same point on the top and bottom of the frame (perhaps at the top and bottom left hand corners). Hope that makes sense? |
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