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09/15/2007 09:15:39 AM |
Critique Club feedback -
The bokeh doesa nicejob hereof causing the model to pop out of the image.
Composition here is a bit odd, could try cropping so the face is either prominent in the scene or located elsewhere in the frame.
Model's expression is... odd. Normally I say 'well what can you do about that model', but here I se eit's your kid so there's no excuse! ;)
To be honest I'm not sure why this score a 4.9. It's not the most exciting image, but it certainly isn't that bad (and doesn't merit ten 3 votes by any stretch of the imagination).
Good luck! |
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09/11/2007 07:07:20 PM |
| Only 12 and Hillary Duff makeup! |
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09/06/2007 07:59:37 PM |
| yikes too much make-up for 12 imo, her facial expression seems a little awkward also |
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09/06/2007 05:41:56 AM |
| Very troubling to me...the makeup obviously betraying the title. |
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09/05/2007 07:04:39 PM |
| Id prefer her looking at us-- but this is a bokeh challenge, and yours is excellent.. 9 |
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09/05/2007 05:41:11 PM |
| Not sure about the idea here... |
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09/05/2007 05:48:19 AM |
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