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02/08/2004 05:24:37 PM |
They certainly go together, at least 3 times a day in my life! This is a great idea but I think it would work better if the light wasn't so bright, the bottom of the toothbrush blends in so much with the bottom of the picture and the while it's nice that the toothpaste and bristles are almost the same color a bit of contrast might be better for this shot. Also the neck of the tube is almost blinding on my monitor which has been calibrated, the threads are lost on the center part of it.
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02/05/2004 11:56:30 PM |
| The bright spot right below the toothbrush in the frame is quite distracting. Its subtle, but for some reason I can't look past it. I think the idea is good and all, but maybe with the toothbrush a little higher in the frame it would conceal the bright spot a little better. It could also make it worse I guess. |
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02/05/2004 06:18:30 AM |
| the lighting is not very good here. Perhaps a bit of playing in photoshop could make this a lot better. |
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02/05/2004 05:04:42 AM |
| A little too washed out on the white but a good shot. |
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02/04/2004 08:08:29 PM |
| working with your lighting to eliminate those shadows would be a worthwhile pursuit |
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02/03/2004 07:11:14 PM |
| Excellent leading lines and composition here. I wish you had used another colored toothbrush (the bristles) or toothpaste as I would have liiked to have seen some color contrast between the two. In addition, the lighting is too harsh and you've lost detail in parts of the image. |
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02/02/2004 03:06:35 PM |
| shadows are harsh and the bright areas over exposed. you might try using a bounce flash to soften the lighting or make a softbox to get subtler light drop off. |
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02/02/2004 11:13:22 AM |
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02/02/2004 10:49:40 AM |
The lighting here seems a little harsh, too bright on the right hand side. The idea is great, I really like how the bristles are the same colour as the tooth paste.
You could have used the clone tool to remove the glare on the toothpaste. 7 |
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02/02/2004 07:12:18 AM |
| The shadow behinf the toothpaste bottle is very distracting. Nice idea though |
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02/02/2004 05:31:00 AM |
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02/01/2004 09:35:20 PM |
| They certainly are. So, unfortunately, are flashes and shadows. Real care has to be taken to avoid them. 4 |
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