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09/22/2002 07:18:00 PM |
| Lighting is too bright, contributing to a washed out appearance. The composition is good, but I might have tried a different aperture setting. |
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09/22/2002 08:21:00 AM |
| poorly framed (sign grass-tree-line and head all converge), overexposed |
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09/20/2002 11:52:00 AM |
| I hate power lines, but I suppose they are necessary. If it had been possible, I think cropping the car out and cropping just below his feet and including more to the left and at the top would be effective. karmat |
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09/19/2002 07:56:00 PM |
| good but would crop the car and power lines out |
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09/19/2002 12:42:00 PM |
| I would like to see this landscaped, closer to the artist, and stopped down a couple. The brightness is causing the edges to catch a video haze, and could benefit from a bit less light. |
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09/19/2002 08:41:00 AM |
I think this photo is a bit over exposed... A polarizer could help in a situation like this...
Meets Challenge: 3
Technical Merit: 5
Artistic Merit: 3
Creative Merit: 5
WOW Factor: 2
Score: 4 - JMSetzler |
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09/18/2002 02:31:00 PM |
| Could you have gotten a better shot from over his shoulder? I know it is overdone to do that, but I think some of what he is painting got lost in your image and takes away from your shot. Nice job, though. |
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09/18/2002 10:29:00 AM |
| This is good. I think I would have liked it a little better if you could have cropped the road out.7 boyte1 |
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09/17/2002 11:53:00 PM |
| Could have been more cropped at the left to remove the car, could have cropped the bottom a bit too. |
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09/17/2002 06:15:00 AM |
| Nice composition, except for car. Focus? |
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09/17/2002 04:43:00 AM |
Composition: 6
Lighting: good 5,
Appeal: 5, Total Rating 5 Sulamk
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09/16/2002 12:33:00 PM |
| I dont see the negative space. Too much going on in the background |
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09/16/2002 11:12:00 AM |
| this could have been cropped better... getting rid of the car and the road would have emphasized the negative space. |
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09/16/2002 09:08:00 AM |
| Little over exposed here and needed to move around so as to leave the car out of the shot. That or have the whole car in the shot. Still I see what you were going for and I like the idea. Score 5 Justine |
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09/15/2002 09:20:00 PM |
| This has unrealized potential. Needed to get rid of the road and car, and work on the exposure. |
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