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02/01/2004 07:58:04 PM |
| Very creative use of light. It looks like the light is spilling out of the vase, which is very cool. This met the challenge very well. Great shot. |
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02/01/2004 03:49:21 AM |
| I know it's tough to control the light streaks from the bottle, they aren't as graceful or captivating enough for me to be the main elements of your composition. |
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01/30/2004 05:55:09 PM |
| You have certainly exhibited that you know the technique of painting with light, however, I find little artistic value here. The commonplace and drab background and dark, undistinguished bottle summon the impression that this was little more than a hasty science experiment gone bad, or maybe fireworks out of control. |
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01/30/2004 06:39:23 AM |
| A genii coming out of the bottle? Cool effects. |
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01/29/2004 11:11:24 PM |
I dont know how to vote on this subject but I think this is good a bit grainy
How did you do this? |
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01/29/2004 05:05:35 PM |
| I love the light streaks. Don't like the background a whole lot. The light streak abstract on its own would do more for me. I don't like the vertical line in the middle of the piece. |
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01/28/2004 01:41:47 PM |
| I ilke this picture, but I feel it may have a better effect without the corner of the wall clearly shown in the middle of the background. |
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01/27/2004 11:12:01 PM |
There are few in this category that "appear" to have painted with ligh. You clearly have. The two trails going vertically, I think would have been better had they "followed the other" giving a more "volcanic" effect. Unfortunatly the background has become a little over lit and "samey". The table top and corner appear disruptive. This is one picture where I think a more cluttered background and obviously different walls may have worked. I think it may have shown something "really weired" happening to a bottle in an ordinary domestic ituation. I suspect you enjoyed trying this and I think you should have some more goes. Keep the technique - experiment with the background.
David
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01/26/2004 12:55:08 PM |
| very imaginative - the light becomes the subject painting on our imagination. Wish the vase weren't so far in the corner - maybe better on the "thirds line' and the corner (the line in the center) is a bit distracting - a flat background would be better (or is the line an artifact of the light?) |
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01/26/2004 09:32:50 AM |
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01/26/2004 02:22:51 AM |
| a surreal shot, this almost looks like a jinny coming out of the bottle. |
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01/25/2004 11:09:53 PM |
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01/25/2004 07:16:42 PM |
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01/25/2004 07:08:38 PM |
| nice! the warm colors work well with the (flames?)! |
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