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02/08/2004 06:18:04 PM |
*Greetings From the Critique Club*
Beautiful Shot!!!
Composition:
This is a beautifully composed shot! I really enjoy the sense of balance this shot has, very well done. I particularly enjoy how you composed each of the different roses at different distances and a different angle at each, this makes it a very dynamic shot, aesthetically pleasing. I personally think the border works quite well here, it gives it a poster-like feel to it, especially with the bottom rose hanging over it, very nice touch.
Focus:
I realize with dark shots like these that focus can be really difficult to nail. Your two back roses have very good focus, but the rfont one I feel is a tad bit out of focus. It really doesn't detract too much from the quality of the photo, but if it were in crisp focus, then this would have been quite a whiz-bang shot.
Lighting:
This is by far the strongest part of this shot. The lighting is simply wonderful! The lighting brings out the different shades of yellow in a very bright and vibrant manner, increases the mood of the shot. Very nicely done!
Overall:
A very gorgeous shot! Really, there isn't much I could suggest to make this photo much better except for the focus on the bottom rose. Good luck on future challenges!
~Matthew (goinskiing)
If you have any comments, questions, or concerns, feel free to PM me. |
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02/01/2004 12:03:32 PM |
| Like the comp. Interesting to know the technique used. |
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02/01/2004 09:15:08 AM |
| Hmmm.likee the idea of the framing with bottom rose going over the frame, nice touch....but you might thin about losing the bit of stem below the frame...it's a bit distracting. Very nice lighting , exposure and detail and I like the perspective of the roses from front to back. |
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01/29/2004 06:29:50 PM |
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01/29/2004 11:42:18 AM |
| i like the very bottom rose hanging over the edge of the yellow frame. but may be a different color line would be more attractive.. but i am sure you probably already experimented with diffferent colors and settled on the yellow..nice photo |
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01/26/2004 06:15:36 PM |
| Pretty flowers and nice composition. The focus is soft but otherwise okay. |
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01/26/2004 05:51:32 PM |
| Has the 3D look. Definitely a wall-hangar. |
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01/26/2004 08:36:02 AM |
| Very nice layout but the some of the edges of the roses look too "Photoshoped" and un-natural. Perhaps a more feathered selection might have helped. I do like how the rose overlaps the yellow border and think it's a nice touch. |
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01/26/2004 05:37:51 AM |
| This is a nice shot. I'm not really a fan of the yellow border, but I like the way the bottom rose overhangs it. |
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01/26/2004 03:15:55 AM |
| Very nice composition, but the focus seems to be a little soft on the bottom rose. I like the way your frame goes behind the rose ... nice touch! |
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01/26/2004 02:21:44 AM |
| Good lighting and the focus seems to be pretty even throughout the three roses! Nice setup also! |
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