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07/22/2007 06:41:18 PM |
| Perhaps you could have forgotten to sharpen? I like the high contrast but I question the shadow falling across the back of the larger bird. |
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07/21/2007 06:32:59 PM |
| Lighting seems a little off, as each swan is remarkably different from the others |
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07/21/2007 06:20:45 PM |
| The shadow on the big swan is distracting. More even lighting and better focus would improve this image. |
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07/20/2007 09:11:17 AM |
| nice idea - lighting seems to uneven |
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07/20/2007 03:10:15 AM |
| The raking light brings out the wrinkles in the paper. Were you really trying to emphasise that? Perhaps more front-on lighting would give a better look for this image. |
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07/18/2007 11:41:43 PM |
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07/18/2007 05:44:18 PM |
| I like the idea but feel the lighting could have been a little better. |
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07/18/2007 12:18:10 PM |
| A good idea for this challenge and it looks like your lighting is pretty good but the image is not in focus. |
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07/18/2007 10:35:12 AM |
| the focus is off, image is a bit to dark, and I wouldn't have left the paper so wrinkly at the nice of the largest swan, maybe cloned or dodged it away as best as possible. it also seems cropped a bit to close to the edges. cool stuff though! |
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07/18/2007 04:41:44 AM |
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07/17/2007 10:44:01 PM |
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07/17/2007 08:16:18 PM |
| out of focus and not enough light. Other then that i would have loved this photo. |
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