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07/23/2007 02:22:31 PM |
| The white t-shirt masks the smoke, which rather defeats the purpose of the composition! |
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07/20/2007 08:09:59 PM |
| I think the shot would be more effective if the subject was blowing the smoke into the black background, rather than his white shirt. |
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07/19/2007 08:39:59 AM |
| i'm having a compassion with this shot.. the model should wore black shirt. to really precise the smoked coming from his mouth.. and it'll be look good it i think... ;) |
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07/18/2007 09:08:08 PM |
| make the shirt black, the background white and it would really bring out the smoke! (7) |
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07/18/2007 01:07:15 PM |
| A darker shirt would have really set this off nicely... this is a very similar idea to the cover of this month's Rangefinder... |
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07/18/2007 09:27:14 AM |
| I don't think the white t-shirt works with the smoke for a moody look. The lighting is good for it but a darker top would have worked better |
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07/18/2007 03:07:51 AM |
| The fall-off of light in this is just lovely. I think you probably needed to give the smoke some context (a setting or a cigarette etc) as it draws the eye a bit too much. As a naturally lit portrait this is great! |
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