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A Snake in the Grass
A Snake in the Grass
ellamay


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Point of View (Classic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Location: bridge deck1
Date: Jan 11, 2004
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 250
Shutter: 1/30
Galleries: Abstract, Macro
Date Uploaded: Jan 13, 2004

My daughter, roxy, gets partial credit for this shot, we were walking over the bridge looking for shots, and we were all most over when she said, 'look mom. a path'....thx roxy.. good eyes!

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01/21/2004 07:25:52 AM
Greetings from the critique club.

I would get this one... I hate snakes and in fact when I saw the title I almost closed it so I wouldn't have to look... good thing I stuck it out.

Nice shot. Very interesting abstract. I still can't quite tell what it is.

Good composition. But I think the main issue is the light. It's just a bit flat and because of this, cause the contrast to low.

This is a wonderful subject and I'd love to see it reshot with different light. Was this a cloudy day? A few shadows might add another element that would elevate the image.

Still, a very fine shot.

JC
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/19/2004 06:00:12 PM
The wonderful naive illusion created here is rare, to say the least.
On first sight, the image appears to be one coming out of a box of crayons, if not straight out of a fairy tale. On closer examination, the apparent -flat- feel, however, yields considerable depth. When we resist the decoy of the elaborate lattice work of twigs and branches obscuring a clear view of the ground, the trunks of trees become visible alongside numerous tufts of fern fringing a winding path (?).
Since no texture is given anywhere on its course, an allegory of a creek or brook is equally established, while the apparent birds' eye perspective is quite incidentally concealed by the proximity of the wicker work.

The magic of this capture, IMO, derives from a rift between the impression of an immediately obvious naivity on hand hand and the complexities obsctructing such a view on the other. The extreme point of view, it seems, makes full use of its vantage and has, I feel, laid out a picture which appears to have composed itself. The undulating -snake-, I discovered, leads the viewer precisely in, through and out of the image.

Straining to add something negative, I'd wish for a little less of some very light greys and blown highlights in and along the twigs and branches. How to accomplish this, without effecting that which I cannot fault, is something this image has made me forget. ;-)

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01/18/2004 05:21:22 PM
I hate snakes what is it?
01/18/2004 03:39:58 AM
Wow, what is that? Great effect, whatever it is! My only worry is the grass - it looks a little over-sharpened to me.
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01/15/2004 05:26:27 AM
Appears overly shapened.
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01/14/2004 02:31:26 PM
not sure if I get it as it relates to point of view
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01/14/2004 07:13:34 AM
Not sure what I'm looking at. A time exposure of passing snake or some kind of trail? Maybe from a lower vantage point?
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01/13/2004 08:27:38 PM
excellent... a pixie path
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