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06/22/2007 11:50:11 AM |
Hello Eugene,
Hmmm, not sure what to make of this.
Composition - Way to tight up & down, left to right cropping here leaves alot to be desired.
Framing - cramped, to much info in to little a space. Because of this the coffee cup, sun glasses & towel detract from the guy reading the book and the opposite can be said for the guy.
Focus - seems kinda soft all around. |
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06/17/2007 01:54:12 PM |
| hmmm. Looks like he's stuffed into a box. My thoughts might have been a landscape shot to show him more stretched out in the scene... |
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06/17/2007 12:59:22 AM |
| nice shot, looks very relaxing. I think it has a slight blue wash over the shot (white ballance is off) good Luck |
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06/13/2007 03:10:49 AM |
| Nice moment of repose shot although perhaps needed a little more colour to give it a bit more pop |
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06/11/2007 07:20:55 PM |
| Way too soft....my eyes keep getting drawn to the Sudoku book. |
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06/11/2007 11:33:33 AM |
| Nice photo, soft on impact... |
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06/11/2007 09:59:56 AM |
| I think the picture might be a little too cropped. I would like to see more of the background.. |
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06/11/2007 08:32:23 AM |
| Soduku and Starbucks. Great way to spend the day! |
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06/11/2007 08:23:53 AM |
| i'd like better focus on him, not the Starbucks cup... |
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