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01/20/2004 06:36:40 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Hi and welcome to DPC! Your first challenge and you did pretty darn good! This is an adorable shot of your son, he's got that look in his eyes that just exudes mischief, LOL!
This is a wonderful candid shot of a child and overall it's very well done. The crop seems just off to me for some reason. I can barely make out his ear on the left and the curtains on the right are fighting for my attention. Tightening in on either side really makes a difference in this shot (I put paper up to the screen to get an idea). And maybe just a little looser on the top and bottom of the shot so you can see a bit more of his hand. The duo tone is a good choice for this shot though I wonder what b/w would look like also.
A fine placement in your first challenge and I hope this helps some. If you do any of the suggestions I put forth I would love to see the new shot.
Good Luck In Future Challenges!
Deannda
DNeufer@stny.rr.com if you have any questions or want to discuss this further!
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01/11/2004 04:35:16 AM |
| Great shot! There must have been a few takes on this one I bet. |
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01/10/2004 12:29:17 AM |
| Good choice of sepia. nice expression |
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01/09/2004 07:02:03 AM |
| very cute photo... needs more cookie crumbs on the cheeks :o) |
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01/09/2004 05:40:41 AM |
| Good photo but seems to have difficulties living without the title. |
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01/08/2004 08:54:02 AM |
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01/07/2004 04:30:38 PM |
| If he was family - that would be a wall hanger for sure. :-) |
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01/07/2004 04:27:20 PM |
| I don't think he will be able to do it! Cute child. |
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01/07/2004 02:13:50 PM |
| Beautiful portrait! Very cute. Just think a little too dark on the kids right side. |
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01/07/2004 10:01:20 AM |
| Awwh. I'd give him a bag of cookies he's so cute. lol Cute title, and boy. Love the light and the tones. Could be a bit sharper? Nice going. |
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01/07/2004 04:57:51 AM |
| Is that mom's resolution because I want MORE cookies! |
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01/07/2004 04:32:50 AM |
| cute capture, love that look in his eyes that says ha ha I'm getting away with something. Sepia tones work well to. 8 |
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01/07/2004 01:54:07 AM |
| Great shot. Nice expression, light and tones. Sepia, gives to this a sense that many years before, you eat cookies yet. But is not so clear that the boy are eating a cookie or something. |
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01/06/2004 09:57:56 PM |
| Adorable- that's the cutest baby ever! Great photo- he looks so happy |
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