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06/18/2007 08:16:38 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club! It looks like an ashtray to me, but from the title I'll assume it's a ring holder, the kind with the little finger in the middle.
Pros:
You have nice colors, and an interesting abstract form.
Cons:
Your commenters pretty much nailed it here; the first reaction I have to this is "out of focus." It may be that the image is actually in focus, but remember that you're essentially using your subject as one of your camera optics, and that its optical quality is very, very low - that is, it may not have been possible to get this in focus. Compositionally, you're walking a line between centered and non-centered; I'd rather see one or the other.
The challenge:
This is a tricky one; had I seen this in voting I would have given you the benefit of the doubt, but at 1/80th of a second exposure you're not "painting with light." I'd be curious to see what would have happened if you'd shot this on for 10-15 seconds instead. |
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06/13/2007 03:20:32 PM |
| I'm not really sure what this is. Nothing is in focus. The colors are interesting. Perhaps if the crop weren't so tight. |
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06/11/2007 03:38:07 PM |
| something with the contrast doesn't seems right, it also looks a bit out of focus IMHO |
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06/11/2007 02:12:56 PM |
| looks too close & oof, intresting colours thou |
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06/09/2007 11:47:35 AM |
| the colors are very nice - especially the oranges and pinks but the image doesnt quite seem sharp enough |
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06/08/2007 08:48:45 AM |
| A little too abstract for me. |
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06/07/2007 11:18:11 PM |
| Nice colours but shots like these need to be pin sharp and this one is lacking that. |
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06/07/2007 01:53:18 PM |
| kind of interesting as a visual abstract however i think a bit more clarity and image quality would have helped this. |
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