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06/15/2007 06:05:53 PM |
| Nice portrait, but the eyes get lost in shadow. |
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06/13/2007 08:26:37 AM |
| Actually, I would go with a smaller frame. The hands detract from the shot and the "pop" of her beauty. I would add just a bit more light and crop it to add some tension |
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06/11/2007 02:13:33 PM |
| I feel squashed looking at your portrait. She's a lovely girl and I think she needs a bigger frame... |
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06/10/2007 02:36:10 PM |
| I love the lighting, does wonders for the complexion. She's a stunning model and I imagine she'd be well pleased with this. Maybe another soft key light to the right to illuminate that side? Good work though. |
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06/08/2007 07:21:16 PM |
| when you filled in the frame some of the black leaked in. You should have the area selected so that won't happen. I find the crop a little odd. Her arms look like a detached pedestal on which the head is resting. Your composition is putting too much attention on her crinkly blouse. nice lighting, though. |
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06/08/2007 03:06:37 PM |
| Beautiful model, like the pose and the lighting feels even maybe a little too shadowy on the right of her face and I feel as if it's cropped a little too tight on the top. Otherwise great shot. |
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