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06/07/2007 12:22:18 AM |
| The only suggestions I could make would be for greater sharpness (maybe greater depth of field or a sharply designated focus point on the arm?) and more contrast. But I am a contrast fiend, so don't mind me. I really like this image; the tones are lovely and I like the choice of subject. I'm always photographing chain-link fences myself, because I find them aesthetically pleasing. I wonder what that says about me. ;-) |
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06/06/2007 11:10:58 AM |
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06/06/2007 08:29:10 AM |
| Keep up the creative work....nice, simple image! Love simple images. |
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06/06/2007 05:09:41 AM |
| nice lens! nuffin bad here. |
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06/06/2007 01:20:28 AM |
| First, I like the shot; there are good tones throughout and the B&W works well here. I agree that the center post should probably be vertical, but I also think a slightly wider DoF might strengthen it. You have an "in-focus" area going from just left of center top down toward the middle, where it starts to fade. Either placing this in-focus area in the upper left "thirds" zone, or making it run full vertical top to bottom might make this a little more natural and effective for me. I like the subject matter here, and the way it's presented, so nothing to add there; it has a nice, fluid feeling from the lines and the angle of the clasp. |
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06/04/2007 10:09:17 PM |
| This really appeals. Great choice for ordinary objects. |
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06/04/2007 06:35:49 PM |
| I really like how the gate isn't completely locked. A feeling of easy access, or the fear of the dog getting out of the yard. Along with this the overall treatment is one of soft gentle lines. There is a story here I feel. Very nice. |
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06/04/2007 05:14:20 PM |
| At first I thought the focus was a bit soft, but I think I like that it has a soft feeling since it's such a hard object processed in cool tones. It's an interesting balance for me. |
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06/04/2007 03:52:52 PM |
dof rolloff is pleasant.... wide open nature of this lens is attractive.
The half round gate latch is a interesting addition to your circular theme. |
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06/04/2007 03:39:45 PM |
| I like it, nice DOF. i too would suggest what citymars said but it isn't overly distracting in this photo. Nice job. |
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06/04/2007 01:12:43 PM |
| Nice job, the only criticism I could see was already mentioned by citymars. Fun shot. |
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06/04/2007 10:37:34 AM |
| Excellent DOF, this is a fantastic shot! |
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06/04/2007 09:06:39 AM |
Can't see anything to criticise - love it :)
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06/04/2007 09:04:15 AM |
| this is really well done ... fantastic processing ... very strong composition ... DOF is great ... makes me want to run home and try a similar shot! |
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06/04/2007 08:29:11 AM |
| I really love this one, but since you asked for criticism: vertical objects (tall buildings, pipes, etc) can be tricky. For example, in this photo I wonder if the center pipe should be the guiding vertical -- a small rotation to the left *might* be in order. Otherwise I love the grayscale and the dof. Good choice of ordinary object! |
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06/04/2007 07:26:02 AM |
| Pat, Beautiful composition and processing. I love the black and whiteprocessing. Lovely tones!! |
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06/04/2007 06:43:07 AM |
| I don't see a lock on it! lol. She must have been bored, to give herself up 2 days early. |
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06/04/2007 06:19:21 AM |
| Commentary on Paris Hilton? :) |
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