Greetings from the Critique Club
Initial thoughts/My opinion
I do see the artistical approach and the message in combination with the text, but the message could have been presented better. Like the glowing, nicely coloured sky surrounding the "moon"
Content/Composition
I'm not completely sure what I see: is it the moon on the left side and some street light on the right? I do see some thin, moon lit clouds (best part to me) and also something like a horizon. And I do see the lines connecting the bright spots on the right side. They are nice too.
The shaking of the camera makes the image of course interesting, but if everything is vague and fuzzy, it's not that easy to understand, even with the text below it.
Speaking of text, I have to say that I neither like the font or colour of it very much. The colour should somehow match with the rest of the image.
Camera work -technically
Not much to say about it: exposure seems fine for this type of image and it seems to be focused also well, according to the light-lines a right.
Digital Processing - Technical
Seems also OK to me
Fits the challenge
Yes, it does, only the message didn't get to me very well.
Final remark
What I do appreciate very much with your submission is that you tried to go beyond the usual concepts and compositions shown here on DPC.
Doing so is always a courageous step that I honour very much, because it is a very important ingredient to DPC.
Good luck for you further submissions
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