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06/03/2007 07:09:38 PM |
I wish it would be taken at night, unless it is a mosquito candle :) |
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06/01/2007 02:07:36 PM |
Do not see the relation... |
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06/01/2007 07:52:39 AM |
I'm guessing the element you're trying to portray here is fire, but I think the picnic really distracts from the candlelight. It also seems like the brightest areas, like in the lake and on the path, are a bit too bright. |
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05/31/2007 12:01:01 PM |
raw corn on a picnic? hehe it has all the elements.. but I'm sorry to say I find it lacking in oomph. |
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05/31/2007 09:24:32 AM |
This would be much more effective if it didn't look like it was noon when it was taken; even dusk would have been better. Your candle flame doesn't take center stage - in fact I have to look for it, and then it seems out of place. |
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05/30/2007 10:28:37 AM |
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05/29/2007 11:27:19 PM |
i usually dont make comments like this but i gotta:
1. candlelight in broad daylight?
2. where is the focus on an element?
3. eggs and raw corn for a picnic?
ill give it a 5 for the nice location |
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05/29/2007 08:38:25 AM |
blown highlights and lack of shadow details hurt this image ... |
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05/29/2007 03:08:18 AM |
The reflections from the water and sky are very distracting IMHO. |
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05/29/2007 02:55:10 AM |
the concept of "elements" is not obvious, though you have included fire and water and produce from the earth. The composition lacks of a main focal point. in addition, the contrast is too high, you have lost detail in water, path, trees and in the dishes |
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05/28/2007 12:40:52 PM |
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