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01/30/2004 12:20:56 AM |
Staggeringly poor score here, but I think your own post-challenge comment is correct. Likewise I'd like to re-inforce what JJ says.
To add to my earlier comment, I meant to say that I appreciate compositionally the almost perfectt banding into the 'thirds' lines image right ... it was more a question of weight, really. That's what lost you the one point from me that would have given you a ten otherwise.
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01/15/2004 02:17:46 PM |
Beautiful shot zeuszen, it deserved better, you got an 8 from me. |
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01/15/2004 09:16:56 AM |
Originally posted by zeuszen: Apparently an excellent example of what not to submit, if your intent is popular appeal. |
But I'm glad you did
I realy wonder what is depicted on this "tableau" |
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01/15/2004 07:34:00 AM |
Apparently an excellent example of what not to submit, if your intent is popular appeal. |
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01/14/2004 07:25:48 PM |
I love this shot...... the moody contempletive foreground is perfect framing for that distant horizon. |
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01/09/2004 03:37:10 AM |
A very satisfying composition with a nice touch of ironic humour. |
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01/07/2004 12:49:49 PM |
Nice, but foreground a bit too dark for me. |
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01/07/2004 03:01:04 AM |
Nice work. Not sure about the sheer amount of the silhouetted foreground - losing more than half of it would give you a stronger compositional shape across the frame from the tree to the table to the very parallel lines between ground and horizon ... just a thought. |
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01/06/2004 06:30:24 AM |
a good example of the rule of thirds in action. |
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01/03/2004 09:53:17 AM |
It can't quite stand on it's own without a title or detail. The spots on the horizon are distracting. |
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01/02/2004 10:49:57 AM |
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01/01/2004 11:48:55 PM |
Nice composition. I would have probably avoided to include the trunk on the left, to put more emphasis on the tableau. |
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01/01/2004 03:34:09 PM |
Nicely composed wonderful image. Good luck. 10 |
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01/01/2004 01:48:47 PM |
The contrast is beautiful on the water and on the sign, but on the foreground the loss of detail is just that- a loss. great composition.. 7 |
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01/01/2004 10:11:24 AM |
Shot has a great emotive quality to it, the dark portion of the water on the horizon is especially inviting, there is a peaceful calm to this shot which is enticing. |
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12/31/2003 07:46:23 PM |
In my opinion, there is too much for the bottom part |
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