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05/20/2007 08:55:15 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Nice focus and also very nice color. Your point of view illustrates well exactly what your were looking to convey.
Lighting: I think that the lighting is what cost you the most points here. Maybe a little fill flash at the bottom of the frame would have helped balance that strong light at the top of the frame.
Composition/Content: In one word, cluttered. I agree with the other posters that taking some of the goodies out of the refrigerator would have helped out a bit. As it is, the cleverness of the cans escaping gets lost in the business of the contents.
My Opinion: Comical and very creative, perhaps one of the more creative entries of the challenge. With a little better lighting and a little less business in the fridge, I think that you'd have pulled a better score.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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05/20/2007 07:54:01 AM |
| jejeje nice idea but you need more work in it!....6 |
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05/19/2007 06:53:51 AM |
| Good, imaginative shot. A little front-lighting would help prevent the dark bottom. |
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05/17/2007 01:58:18 PM |
| Fun idea and nice set up with the cans although feels a bit cluttered with the fridge full of random stuff. |
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05/16/2007 03:39:32 PM |
| Very funny setup. Don't think it makes a great album cover, but kudos for trying it. |
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05/16/2007 12:07:28 PM |
| Ha! Clever! Execution would have been aided by cleaning the fridge out just a touch, but I think this is a very good concept! |
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05/16/2007 10:50:58 AM |
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05/15/2007 12:58:04 PM |
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05/15/2007 09:35:33 AM |
| lmao this is so funny.. i love the picture and the creativity |
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05/15/2007 06:53:34 AM |
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05/14/2007 08:01:31 PM |
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05/14/2007 07:20:14 PM |
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05/14/2007 05:48:25 PM |
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05/14/2007 05:09:16 PM |
| this isn't really shaped like an album (square). It's a neat idea, but the lighting doesn't work. Maybe some additional light outside of the refrigerator? |
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05/14/2007 10:45:14 AM |
| doesn't look anything like an album cover to me (wrong format and the band name seems strange0 but it sure is a funny pic. |
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05/14/2007 10:24:02 AM |
| I LOVE Diet Pepsi, and this is TOO cute of an idea! Great execution! |
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05/14/2007 07:58:26 AM |
| the blown out fridge light hurts this one ... clever idea though |
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05/14/2007 05:05:09 AM |
| nicely executed and whimsy. beware of copyright infringement. too bad the title wasn't used on the image to strengthen the theme. |
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05/14/2007 03:03:02 AM |
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