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05/20/2007 09:42:55 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: I like the idea you had here, but I think that the lack of focus is a bit overbearing for what you produced. While I understand the use of motion, I think zooming out a bit, thus including more of a focused area, would have made this one easier to look at.
Lighting: Your lighting is the strength of this image, in my opinion. Even with the motion blur, its pretty easy to see that you captured a very nicely lit scene.
Composition/Content: Again, I think that the subject occupies a bit too much of the frame. Your choice of text and font fits this one very well.
My Opinion: Overall, I like it. I would, however, like to see more of the scene around the speeding vehicle. I think it would really pull me more into the scene and frame, making it more real to me as a viewer.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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05/20/2007 05:08:00 PM |
great blurr....looks like it's in London....also like your title and font |
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05/18/2007 04:42:55 PM |
I'm confused. It looks as if the car is going backwards. I guess that just adds to the interest of the image. |
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05/16/2007 11:18:21 AM |
Appropriate black cab moving and great title. |
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05/15/2007 07:33:34 AM |
beautiful capture, i love the motion blur in this and goos title as well. |
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05/15/2007 07:20:09 AM |
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05/14/2007 08:41:38 PM |
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05/14/2007 07:14:17 PM |
Cool, I could deffinately see this as a cover. |
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05/13/2007 11:29:07 PM |
The cool thing is it almost seems like the car is going backwards. |
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05/13/2007 10:11:06 PM |
very nicely done! it's almost making me dizzy! lol. I'm usually not to big a fan of car motion images as they turn out a little cheesy but this one was done quite nicely with very little distracting factors. |
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