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yonderman


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Camera: Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Lens: Tamron AF 28-80mm f/3.5-5.6 Aspherical for Canon
Location: Jacksonville, AL
Date: May 10, 2007
Galleries: Urban, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: May 12, 2007

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 05/12/2007 12:16:36 AM
There is definitely potential in this picture. But also some errors imho.

I would crop much tighter. That's always something you tend to do wrong in the beginning. Here the wall adds nothing but distraction. The strength of the photo is the eye.

Also the ligh is not optimal. Too much from above. The eyes are too dark. Have a look at this thread //www.dpchallenge.com/forum.php?action=read&FORUM_THREAD_ID=585228

also color cast is a bit orange, but that may be my screen.

Message edited by author 2007-05-12 04:17:39.
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 05/11/2007 11:10:46 PM
I would have put her face in the top of the frame and had fer stand at least ten paces away from the quite distracting brick wall.

otherwise a nice attempt
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