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05/16/2007 11:57:21 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Very nice use of your depth of field. This does an excellent job of nicely isolating your subject, which I might add, is the most important part of any game. Without the beer man, I'd have to get up far too many times.
Lighting: I'd like to see this one lit better. Perhaps a little more exposure would have helped out here. I use a very bright monitor, and everything looks a bit dark here.
Composition/Content: Nice rule of thirds use. This really helps pull the eye up and into the frame. The heads at the bottom of the screen are fairly distracting, yet understandable.
My Opinion: Nice work, but it appears that this isn't exactly what the voters were looking for. Nice job thinking out of the box to capture a different side of the action.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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05/13/2007 04:40:57 PM |
| Nice idea. I would consider cropping more of the bottom so you do not see the balding guys head. |
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05/12/2007 03:59:31 PM |
| Excellent use of focus to create a very interesting and unique image. Composition works well; I wish there was a little more light on his face but there's no way to control that. |
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05/11/2007 06:32:08 AM |
| Lol, a sport of its own.Nice dof. Good luck |
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05/10/2007 11:56:50 AM |
| I like the different perspective of the game. |
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05/10/2007 06:22:36 AM |
| good idea - loses the subject in the shadows though |
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05/09/2007 08:05:41 PM |
| This has the potential of a good shot, but the blurry subject in front of the person is really annoying. Other than that, the limtied DOF really makes you focus on the guy in the yellow shirt. |
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05/08/2007 08:30:05 PM |
| i don't like the blurry foreground |
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