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05/29/2007 05:49:10 PM |
Originally posted by howzitboy:
think the flash was a bit too much. id go for 1 stop or 2 stops less exposure and try get some directional lighting if can.
and, one more thing, the pose looks too "posed". too much tension on her shoulders. Id bring her hands a bit farther apart and have her not stick her chest out. |
I'd have to disagree on every count here. I think the things howzitboy says may be true from a traditionalist point of view, but this is a very contemporary, stylish photo, and with that in mind, I think this photograph is stunning. I could see it in The Fader, or XLR8R or something.
nice work
Message edited by author 2007-05-29 22:33:57. |
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05/24/2007 10:15:17 PM |
think the flash was a bit too much. id go for 1 stop or 2 stops less exposure and try get some directional lighting if can.
and, one more thing, the pose looks too "posed". too much tension on her shoulders. Id bring her hands a bit farther apart and have her not stick her chest out. |
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05/10/2007 06:01:34 AM |
I really like this shot ... Is that a "bo" as in martial art weapon?
I think a slightly tighter crop would make this image more dynamic ... and I think I would try to blur the sharp shadow going back from her left knee to see if I could soften it a tad. If you could squeeze a BIT more dynamic range out of this image, I think it might be better too.
All in all a very pleasing image with some potential to be even better with not much PP. |
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