CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
yea, I've had a few that begged for submission, too.
Compositionally, you have a good idea here. It is a very subtle symmetry (which may not have been obvious to some folks), so it meets the challenge. I do find the dark horizon behind them a bit distracting, especially since it "cuts" straight through their chest areas. It might have been a neat effect to get on your knees, or squat down so that you were looking up at them.
Technically, the silhouette and the blue hues are nice. Even though we can't see their face, they don't look particularly happy, though. It looks like he is leaning in to kiss her nose, and she is almost pulling back. I think something simpler like having both of them lean in and touch foreheads would have been more effective.
The background looks like it was stunning, and I bet you got some shots that they will treasure always.
If I need to further clarify or explain myself, please feel free to contact me.
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