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05/07/2007 03:34:38 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club -
Loved seeing this picture come up for me to comment on. I really enjoyed your model throughout the 30 days of portraits and I enjoyed this picture as well. I gave this shot a 6 in challenge. I think there are a couple of things that could have been changed to bring that score up.
You sure caught three nice expressions, but the change in framing on the last image really breaks the flow. The third image has such a strong expression that I think it would have fit better in the middle - even if the alignment of the girl in the image had been the same.
Well - I guess thats it. I think that is the biggest reason your image didnt break 6. The b&w conversion is nice, the frame is pretty cool (maybe a bit thinner on the black outer part) but overall it compliments your images nicely. Nice detail and a really cute girl. This is a just a really nice and pleasing image. Not a whopping stunner to bring you in the higher votes but really nothing drastically wrong either which shows in your tight vote spread. Not alot real high but no real low ones either.
Keep on with the good work. I look forward to seeing your future images!
Tim |
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05/06/2007 08:34:04 PM |
| This is a complete travesty for this to have not done better. |
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05/06/2007 08:34:04 PM |
| This is a complete travesty for this to have not done better. |
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05/06/2007 08:30:00 PM |
| Well, I loved this - gave it an 8. It's a terrific way to save memories for you and your family. :) |
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05/04/2007 04:02:59 PM |
| I love them as individual images, but as a group I think the smiling one should go in the middle. The collection looks unbalanced as it is. |
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05/03/2007 05:18:52 AM |
| Good use of three distinct expressions to create a nice triptych. 8 |
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05/02/2007 06:49:02 AM |
| Nice crisp images with a fresh feel - Maybe a slightly varied set of pics though may have helped. |
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05/01/2007 07:13:07 PM |
| nice use of framing - cute kid! |
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05/01/2007 01:09:10 PM |
| adorable... nice portraits!! |
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04/30/2007 05:15:56 PM |
| Lol. Priceless with a culminating smile to move any heart. |
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04/30/2007 03:19:38 PM |
| So cute expressions. I wish the far right one was more even with the others. This one seems cropped to tight on the top. |
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04/30/2007 10:33:26 AM |
| nice expressions. I would have tweaked the crop on the third image to match the other two. 6 |
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04/30/2007 09:20:11 AM |
the first 2 are too similar, if you had 3 quite differnt expression this would of been great. 6
PS. the framing is nice though |
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04/30/2007 08:05:04 AM |
| the focus seems a little soft on the midle and left frames. nice idea. |
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04/30/2007 06:33:07 AM |
| Cute expressions although the first and second are a little similar. Perhaps having the third one in the middle would have balanced it out. Nice shot though. |
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04/29/2007 09:32:58 PM |
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04/29/2007 08:36:46 PM |
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04/29/2007 08:33:02 PM |
| Priceless. The one on the right is particularly charming. Well done. |
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