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05/07/2007 08:23:23 AM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Very nicely done, and one of the favorite songs at our house, I might add.
Compositionally, I like how you have used the white frame to emphasize the individual body parts. This adds an element of interest to the shot. Also, I like how that it is not obvious that it is three separate pictures, but rather he looks stacked "on top of himself"
Technically, it is also well done. There are details visible, no obvious 'blowouts,' and the lighting is nice and even. While it may not be incredibly dramatic, it is clean and helps to convey your message clearly. It does seem a bit flat to me though, even though you seem to have clear blacks and whites and tones in between. I'm not sure that bw works best for this shot (having not seen the color version, I definitely don't know) but I could see how this shot could be interesting with a bright background and complimentary colored shorts or something.
Nicely done, and a good showing.
If I need to further clarify or explain myself, please feel free to contact me.
karma |
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05/06/2007 09:06:01 PM |
What a great shot - this should have placed in the top 10. |
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05/05/2007 01:12:38 PM |
How beautifull!!!! Love the setup Too bad the toes look a little cut on the bottom left ! |
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05/03/2007 10:07:23 AM |
AWESOME! Absolutely love it! Maybe lighten up the frames to pure white so they stand out a little more but I'd give it a 10 if they would let me vote! haha |
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05/02/2007 05:24:16 PM |
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05/02/2007 07:38:00 AM |
Great idea that works well. |
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05/02/2007 06:02:54 AM |
Great concept, well executed! |
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05/02/2007 02:14:53 AM |
This is too cute! I love it! |
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05/01/2007 10:12:38 PM |
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05/01/2007 01:23:46 PM |
very cool idea... came out great! creative!! |
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05/01/2007 01:05:06 PM |
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04/30/2007 05:02:15 PM |
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04/30/2007 02:17:30 PM |
Great shot, made me laugh, looks like a freakishly tall child. 9 |
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04/30/2007 12:30:59 PM |
Cute and original idea. It's been an eternity since I heard that song ;-) |
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04/30/2007 11:21:04 AM |
Very cute. I like how he is sometimes 'outside' of the frame. |
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04/30/2007 10:39:34 AM |
very cute and creative. 7 |
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04/30/2007 10:17:41 AM |
Love this...love the title. |
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04/30/2007 08:12:43 AM |
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04/30/2007 03:23:33 AM |
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04/29/2007 08:57:38 PM |
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04/29/2007 08:43:53 PM |
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04/29/2007 08:33:25 PM |
hahaha very cute...i was trying to create something like that...but it didn't work for me so i had to do something else! |
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