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05/08/2007 06:46:26 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Terrific whites, grays and darks. You found a great sky and captured it well. The one-third, two-thirds composition works well and while it would have been splendid if you could have had a calm, motionless body of water, this rippled effect works too.
I'm of two minds about the rocks to the right. While I suspect you were going for an anchor for the bottom of the image, and this is one, I wish it was a bit stronger. Naturally, that's just one person's opinion (mine) and should be taken as such.
In any event, this image worked well for you and you received some nice scores from our voters. And I do like to see nicely done black & white work. This is, indeed, nicely done. |
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05/03/2007 04:20:47 PM |
| dramatic, the city is so lost under that cloud formation; the rock & foliage right corner distract me, compete with the pier. Maybe a closer crop on the water as foreground & the pier as the would have (indirectly) provided the emphasis of the buildings? |
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05/03/2007 09:14:47 AM |
This is great! Incredible depth, and the light on the skyline is amazing. I'm torn about the shoreline on the right; the framing it adds is nice, but it only covers 1/3 of the edge and to me is a little distracting, if it could have been continued farther up the frame I think that would have helped.
I say 9. Very nice shot. |
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05/03/2007 12:21:01 AM |
| What a wonderful sky! Beautifully pictured. |
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05/02/2007 11:27:19 PM |
| the light rock on the right is a bit distracting. great conversion and drama |
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05/02/2007 05:31:09 PM |
| Cool photo. You've shown how nature still towers over us - even our big cities. You've got some nice whites in this photo. The large rock on the right is a little distracting - maybe we need more or less of the shoreline. |
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05/01/2007 07:09:35 PM |
| Great view of the city, the sky is incredible. Nice work. |
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05/01/2007 03:32:27 PM |
| nice composition, looks quite dramamtic. |
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05/01/2007 05:01:25 AM |
| Fantastic capture! I'd love see it in color as well :-) |
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