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05/07/2007 08:46:24 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club -
First off congrats on the 6+score and a very good placing in a tough challenge. You did well.
I gave this shot a 7 in challenge. I forgot to go back and do my usual bumping - this may have moved up one. I don't really have alot of negative to say. Nice b&w conversion, interesting character, good use of light and shadows, and the three different sized frames work well.
I think one thing that may have improved the "story" of your shot is to have the final and largest image be the one with the most "escape" - to have that one be the shot with the furthest progression. As it is it seems like the right corner is that one. But overall you have a very good shot here. Good emotion, good technicals. I can see some of the votes at 4 and 5 being legit. I really don't know how anyone could give this a 1-3. If anythign you met the challenge criteria even before any technical or artistic merit.
Keep up the good work. Your portfolio shows a nice string of interesting and creative portraits. Looking forward to seeing moreas challenges go along.
Tim |
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05/07/2007 05:00:04 AM |
Congratulations Sander and such a great finish! I gave you a 9! Very will executed shot! Did you ever escape? LOL |
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05/04/2007 04:52:38 PM |
I give it a 10 for the OMG what the F@#k is he doing effect. |
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05/03/2007 01:17:25 PM |
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05/01/2007 09:19:55 AM |
Great set - Great lighting and nice contrast. |
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04/30/2007 09:08:24 PM |
I like the idea and the shots. I think I'd prefer the triptych arrangement if it told a continuous story. Given the title, I expected the bottom one to be the most free of the three. |
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04/30/2007 05:21:16 PM |
Technically immaculate, but the concept doesn't do it for me. |
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04/30/2007 05:17:59 PM |
Quite the persuasive image. |
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04/30/2007 12:56:20 PM |
Did it hurt pulling off that tape?
=P |
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04/30/2007 11:13:45 AM |
Very creative and different. Makes it stand apart from the other pics = 9. |
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04/30/2007 03:59:10 AM |
You'll get out of it... superb... love your presentation... |
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04/30/2007 02:28:57 AM |
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04/30/2007 01:11:02 AM |
excellent tones. comment only. |
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04/30/2007 01:01:38 AM |
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04/29/2007 09:05:55 PM |
Ouch - hope it's not a self portrait - SMILE! Great idea |
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04/29/2007 08:46:08 PM |
Excellent, great B&W tones. 9 |
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04/29/2007 08:15:20 PM |
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04/29/2007 08:13:52 PM |
love the title and all of the images...9 from me |
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