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05/05/2007 05:51:30 AM |
| thanks MattO :)I agree with you on all things. And looking back on my outtakes there are some there that would have been better for this challenge. |
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05/04/2007 08:30:15 AM |
Greetings from the Critique club. First things first, did you meet the challenge? I think so you have bubbles in the photograph, however your focus point seems to be on the girl not the bubbles. I would have preffered a tack sharp bubble with a reflection of the girl coming through it. As it is most of the focus is on the girl, even though its soft focus, I'd also suggest that you straighten out the background, the wrinkles are very distracting and take away the viewers attention from the intended subject. I do like the composition and I think you had a fantastic vision and I feel that with some of the tweaks to it I mentioned you have a fantastic shot on your hands.
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05/01/2007 07:48:25 PM |
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05/01/2007 04:01:55 PM |
| I like how all the different colors work together in this photograph. |
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04/30/2007 09:53:50 AM |
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04/30/2007 08:28:31 AM |
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04/28/2007 11:37:49 PM |
| Nice portrait and excellent feel... I think a smiling Barbie might blend with the bubbles better, but that is just my opinion. |
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04/28/2007 09:21:19 PM |
| The challenge is bubbles that why i prefer to be focus the bubbles and not the girl.maybe it was better. |
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04/27/2007 05:07:07 AM |
| The composition is good and I like how the theme of the bubbles is carried through with the pearls. The wrinkles in the backdrop are pretty ugly though. |
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04/26/2007 09:11:41 PM |
| shallow DOF, had the focus been on the bubbles, this would have fitted the challenge better |
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04/26/2007 08:57:59 PM |
| I think the bubbles should somehow contribute to the shot, not just be in a shot of something else. |
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04/25/2007 02:20:16 PM |
| she is pretty and I like the photo. |
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04/25/2007 09:23:15 AM |
| the wrikles in the cloth and the softer focus are a bit distracting. nice idea and I like the composition. |
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04/25/2007 09:16:33 AM |
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04/25/2007 07:46:34 AM |
| I like this image. Nice color combination, and composition! |
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04/25/2007 02:09:46 AM |
| If the backdrop was ironed it would be less distracting I think. Because the person in the photo is striking and deserves the full attention. |
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