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05/05/2007 10:32:27 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
First impression - I like this! It makes me smile. Looks like a lovely day, and a very lovely view.
Technicals - very crisp focus on your subject and nice depth of field to blur the background yet keep it coherent. Lighting is very good.
Meets the challenge - yep. Looks quite rule of thirds to me. What may have helped your score a bit, though, would be to have the horizon on a third line as well. That said, I quite like it on the half line. Adds a nice balance to the third line with the flower.
This is a lovely, quiet shot, and an excellent first challenge entry. Don't let scores around here discourage you - keep shooting and keep entering! |
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04/29/2007 04:30:25 PM |
| Nice way to show the rule of thirds... this sure looks like this might be inthe the Phoenix, Arizona USA metropolitan area. |
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04/28/2007 07:22:34 AM |
| I'd recommend stooping down a bit and tilting up the camera to get the same flower shot and get the horizon on the lower thirds line and away from the focal point. |
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04/26/2007 08:19:14 PM |
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04/26/2007 12:40:06 PM |
| this would have been a winner if the dof could have been greater and completely blurred the background, still worthy of a good score for the 1/3 rule....7 |
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