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Challenge: Rule of Thirds III (Basic Editing)
Camera: Minolta DiMAGE Z1
Location: South korea
Date: Apr 22, 2007
Aperture: 3.2
ISO: 100
Shutter: 160
Date Uploaded: Apr 23, 2007

 I found this ice cream melting and the colors and splatters made a beautiful piece of work.

I added some contrast and sharpened the image in photoshop.

I enjoy this picture and hope others will too.

Statistics
Place: 368 out of 380
Avg (all users): 4.0461
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 3.9014
Avg (non-participants): 4.1728
Views since voting: 516
Views during voting: 222
Votes: 152
Comments: 6
Favorites: 0

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AuthorThread
 05/05/2007 09:47:26 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club

Hello! I spent a long time looking at your interesting abstract wondering why it received such a low score. It's an abstract into which one can read many interpretations. Right now, I see a dancing figure.

Then, the light dawned: the Challenge asked us to illustrate the Rule of Thirds, and your composition has as its main attraction that nice design of white smack in the middle of the image.

Technically, I like the good definition in the bricks and the color is really good. It's a pleasing piece to look at and (imo)it surely would have received a higher score if it came closer to an interpretation of the Challenge.

I really like the way your imagination functions. Keep 'em coming!

SFAlice
 05/02/2007 04:53:14 PM
Originally posted by JenniferDavidGA:
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Sorry for this comment during voting. I downloaded a script to vote with the keypad and it wasn't working right. I am going back and commenting on all these I messed up on.

I voted this low because I just don't get it. Tt sees out of focus and is laking a good subject.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/01/2007 06:53:40 PM
there's a sense of progression to this, more than what I see in most of the triptychs! 9
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 04/30/2007 02:27:53 AM
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  Photographer found comment helpful.
 04/28/2007 01:46:18 PM
Most of the mess is centered down the middle. The two horizontal lines one between the curb and brick and another in the brick are at the thirds spacing but they are not the subject. Try moving it more left or right towards one side. Eww dirty treat. Not good for a human but any dog will lick it up no questions asked.
 04/26/2007 03:37:11 PM
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