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05/03/2007 12:19:11 AM |
Hi from the Critique Club.
Fit: A fork is used to prepare food so it fits ok.
Composition: Good composition for such an extreme macro. You have got the fork placed so that we have a nice leading curve from bottom left up to top right.
Technical: The lighting and DOF is good. If anything the DOF is a bit too shallow given there is nothing in the background to isolate the fork from.
Feel: Here is where the image may have lost a few points. It's a nice macro that meets challenge but it lacks an emotional feel. I know that's hard from a fork but the viewers need to be able to connect with the image. If you look at the high raters in your portfolio you can see there is something in them that viewers can relate to.
PM me if you have any queries. |
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04/29/2007 08:35:44 PM |
I gave this a 9. Nice clean lines and composition and you got the focus in the *perfect* spot. |
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04/29/2007 07:29:23 PM |
nice macro, i def expected one of these.. well done |
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04/29/2007 06:52:29 AM |
Nice experiment in selective focus, good angle so the subject extends across the frame. |
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04/28/2007 11:01:12 AM |
Nice shot. I like the DOF. 7 |
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04/28/2007 07:23:41 AM |
awesome....give an unique dimension..... |
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04/28/2007 06:34:35 AM |
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04/27/2007 08:59:43 AM |
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04/27/2007 04:11:17 AM |
Simple, clean, graphic! I like it. |
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04/26/2007 06:02:22 PM |
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04/25/2007 08:38:28 AM |
good focus, i think a different background would have helped this photo. |
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04/24/2007 06:11:59 PM |
Nice composition, One pea for color maybe? |
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04/24/2007 12:51:05 PM |
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04/24/2007 04:24:13 AM |
Lovely, simple macro. Good lighting. |
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04/23/2007 04:20:10 PM |
nice clean, simple pic. good composition, shape and depth of field. the color is subtle too. |
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04/23/2007 02:49:33 AM |
Abstract idea is good, but for me the dof is way too shallow and it doesn't say kitchenware to me. |
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04/23/2007 01:08:35 AM |
"your task is to shoot the stuff you use to PREPARE your food."
Besides that, well composed and lightened. black border fits well, too. |
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