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12/17/2003 09:07:50 AM |
Greetings from the critique club
Good use of selective lighting on this shot.
I find the focus just a little off.
As far as the challenge, there is not one central focal shape.
My eye first travels to the top right where there are many shapes, rather than to the single one at the bottom.
Colour and detail are good. Maybe just a bit over exposed on the top elements.
JC |
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12/14/2003 05:02:32 PM |
| Good Spotlight-- maybe a little closer -- |
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12/14/2003 08:19:35 AM |
| Our forst experiences with shapes. A good idea. I like the spotlight too - metaphore for how a child will focus on one toy. one task. Perhaps a close-up of the top of the box, with the holes and shapes starting to fit though would be a more cohesive image - more "focused." I like the shape of the holes. The "cage" of shapes below is a bit jumbled and hard to see, ittakes away from the strong image of the top of the box. |
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12/13/2003 06:10:36 PM |
| The spotlight effect works well, although for me the shadows are too stark. |
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12/10/2003 02:08:08 PM |
| Beautiful lighting, exposure and framing. Nice job! 7 |
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12/08/2003 07:52:06 PM |
| Kind of neat with the spotlit focus on the subject. Good lighting, OK subject. Should have cropped the left a little more, IMAHO. :D |
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12/08/2003 04:32:31 AM |
| Great idea, and a nice composition. I think the large amount of black around it reduces the effectiveness. |
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