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Challenge: Shapes (Advanced Editing I*)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Location: my bedroom
Date: Dec 6, 2003
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 1600
Shutter: 0"3
Galleries: Abstract
Date Uploaded: Dec 6, 2003

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Statistics
Place: 122 out of 125
Avg (all users): 4.5833
Avg (commenters): 5.3333
Avg (participants): 4.5926
Avg (non-participants): 4.5714
Views since voting: 973
Votes: 144
Comments: 8
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 12/19/2003 01:11:45 AM
from the Critique Club

There's real mystery here - and eye-pleasing colour combinations, at least to my eye. I'm not convinced by the size at which you've decided to submit this, I don't think it would have been hurt by being a bigger image and more compressed (it ain't like there's fine detail to be damaged). I also wonder if your cropping is quite the best presentation of this - given that you've chossen to have the lower right area going out fo frame, I think you could have brought the white and blue circles more into the image - cropping out the left a bit perhaps, but to my eye more definitely the upper area, which seems to impose its weight too heavily on the main interest ...

Good score for an in-your-face abstract shot though.

Ed
 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/14/2003 05:27:14 PM
I would have liked something in focus. 4
 12/14/2003 05:12:44 PM
Abstract shapes, little blurry though
 12/14/2003 04:52:32 PM
excellent. love the abstract quality and out of focus lights
 12/11/2003 04:48:41 AM
Nice abstract. Good composition. The only thing that bothers me is the light patch in the lower right corner.
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 12/10/2003 02:24:55 PM
Very cool idea. Fits the challenge well.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/08/2003 08:22:45 PM
Looks tilted to the right. The "shapes" fit the challenge pretty well.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 12/08/2003 07:20:09 PM
This image seems a bit small nice use of shapes
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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