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04/23/2007 03:55:04 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
Fit: There is a bicycle in the shot so its meets challenge.
Composition: It feels fine, horizon is level, subject isnt centered. The bike rack on the right distracts a bit from the left of frame where we are supposed to be looking.
Technical: The longs shadows provide a nice emphasis on the bike. The mass of brown is a bit bleak feeling. Increasing the saturation or somehting on the pink may have helped draw the bike out from the browns a bit more (using selective colour not masking)
Feel: The image doesnt relly spek to me in the way that your notes say you intended.
PM me if you have any queries. |
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04/17/2007 02:59:48 PM |
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04/17/2007 12:42:47 AM |
| No real wow factor. Too dark in the foreground. |
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04/16/2007 07:30:21 PM |
| Nice caption! Would be better if the handlebars didn't disappear into the background. |
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04/16/2007 07:49:14 AM |
| could need some rethinking of composition and perspective to make the photo more exciting |
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04/15/2007 04:21:02 PM |
| I like the shadows and the lonely bike. Could be sharper. |
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04/14/2007 06:10:15 PM |
| gotta love the dramatic shadows. 8 |
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04/13/2007 10:49:31 AM |
| Quite funny, great title! |
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04/11/2007 08:29:43 AM |
| Nice composition, evokes a feeling of aloneness, with the small bike vs the rest of image. |
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04/11/2007 07:27:53 AM |
| hmm i think that you need to crop out some of the background to focus on the bike |
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04/10/2007 08:57:40 PM |
| cool! i like the lighting. and a purple bike? how cool is that. im jealous! |
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