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05/12/2007 09:20:30 AM |
Greetings from the Critique CLub -
You have a nicely composed image here with the placement of your model and the window. The colors on your model are very pleasing as well.
A couple of issues would be the sharpness of your model - a bit more in focus would be nice, and the blending of the staircase rail against the back wall. A bit mroe separation would have been nice IMO. And maybe a bit of a smile. She looks a bit tense, but thats not a major issue. Just something I was feeling.
This is in general a nice pic. Nothing really WOW about it but also nothing really bad about it either which came through in the voting curve. I am sure you know how DPCers want that wow factor to give out higher scores to. This falls short there. All that said, I would love to have an image like this on my camera. That would mean I got to hang at the Canary Islands. ;)
Keep on shooting and I look forward to seeing your future work.
Tim |
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05/07/2007 06:04:35 PM |
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05/01/2007 11:23:07 AM |
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05/01/2007 08:54:33 AM |
| great composition. the stairs and the window add interest to what would otherwise be a fairly standard portrait. |
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04/30/2007 08:18:51 PM |
| Would've been nice if she smiled, relaxed a little... |
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