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04/17/2007 10:35:08 PM |
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04/12/2007 03:21:37 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
Congratulations on your new personal best!
This is a well-executed creative idea. However, I think it has great appeal to a limited number of people who belong to the US baseball culture, and limited appeal to everyone else.
My first reaction was: meh, seen this before with nicer backgrounds. I've never heard of the Cleveland Indians, and had I not read the comments below, I wouldn't even know what sport it was. So while I find the shot technically very well done, I probably would have marked it down on the basis that I don't find it that aesthetically pleasing.
Now, having understood what it's about, my critique would be as follows:
I think the subject matter is very good, and the way in which it has been portrayed is extremely creative. It portrays the passion and emotion that sports fans put into their obsession, and does so in an original way.
TechnicallyL the photo is sharp and well lit (although the occasional bits are a bit too bright), the composition is interesting, and I think the water droplets going over the edge of the frame work well, as they make the image more 3-dimensional and interesting. I personally don't like the colours, but obviously, given the idea, there wasn't really a choice there.
The reflections of the droplets in the glass are a bit distracting in some of the droplets. I think they work well in the bottom left corner, where it gives a tearlike reflection, but on the top right it just seems a bit distracting. So maybe taking a photo from above rather than from the side might have improved it by getting rid of the reflections? Not sure about that one...
Anyway, that's all I can think of. God, men and sport, honestly... :p
PM me if you have any questions.
Jelena |
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04/11/2007 04:26:54 PM |
Think this one should have done better, very cool image. |
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04/08/2007 07:20:06 AM |
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04/07/2007 01:38:59 PM |
Very ingeniously arranged and photographed.Excellent.The ball just coming out of the picture is great. |
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04/06/2007 04:53:29 PM |
Too bad that wasn't a Yankee logo in the background. :P |
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04/05/2007 09:46:06 AM |
Yeah go Tribe, I hope it isn't snowing. Very well done. |
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04/04/2007 09:44:33 AM |
Very crisp and clean - nice use of the overlap on the borders. |
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04/03/2007 07:21:54 PM |
Shouldn't that say Cubs? Well done and clever title. |
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04/03/2007 05:03:16 PM |
Lots of other teams' fans could relate to this concept right about now ;-) |
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04/03/2007 02:27:15 PM |
Right then, joke's on me as I now have to plough through 564 images and bump them all (yes, all of them) up. There'll be a third run through for fine tuning. It's day two three now and I'm running late, sorry.
Wrong culture, sorry, 5 |
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04/02/2007 06:23:13 PM |
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04/02/2007 02:32:35 PM |
Nicely executed. RainEx, right?... |
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04/02/2007 12:54:20 PM |
Cool, haven't seen one of these in awhile. Good timing. |
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04/02/2007 10:54:52 AM |
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04/02/2007 06:15:33 AM |
lol,i know your pain,braves fan here |
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04/01/2007 09:34:15 AM |
I'm not much of a baseball fan but I really like this image! I like how they are not all unifom drops. |
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04/01/2007 07:40:53 AM |
Indians look to be pretty darn good this year. Too bad the Mets will be better :) |
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