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11/25/2003 06:46:21 PM |
| Great concept and neat set up...but focus hurt the image a little. |
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11/25/2003 04:48:28 PM |
| i dont get the message on this, but i like the picture. A little out of focus and a distracting objet on the rigth low corner. |
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11/25/2003 04:48:58 AM |
| I'm not really clear on what you were going for here... I think maybe you meant to put this in literalisms and not in propaganda? I'm going to comment on it though, what I like, and what could be improved. I like the uncluttered, plain, white background... it definitely adds to the photo. I do not like your placing the main part almost perfectly centered... use your rule of thirds! I would crop off a substantial amount of white from the top and the left, placing the subject in the upper left hand of the photo. I like your use of texture in the bandaid, next to the smoothness of the scissors. I'm bothered by the showing of the skin in the bottom right. Hope you find these comments useful. |
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11/24/2003 08:00:04 PM |
| Creative use of negative space but the focus seems very soft. |
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11/23/2003 07:47:10 PM |
| interesting photo although i cant seem to link it to propaganda |
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11/23/2003 10:23:15 AM |
| Is this over my head? is this a photo decrying against home circumcision? the finger in the corner should be cropped out of the shot. |
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11/23/2003 08:42:43 AM |
this is rather impressive... there are somethings that could be done to improve the quality of the image, but this just shouts BENETTON commercial to me.
well done. |
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11/22/2003 04:18:45 AM |
| i'm not sure what you're trying to illustrate here... |
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11/21/2003 08:07:15 AM |
| Gotta say this looks like something totally different in the thumbnail :) |
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11/20/2003 07:45:28 PM |
And this has what to do with the challenge?
It also needs to be sharpened or preferably focused while you're taking the picture. |
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11/20/2003 11:58:03 AM |
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11/19/2003 03:32:11 AM |
| Not sure about the message here. The composition is quite bleak. |
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11/19/2003 02:37:29 AM |
| the other finger is neither here nor there..... is it in or out?? its distracting at the moment. Didnt quite get the meaning of the shot. |
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11/19/2003 12:14:00 AM |
| Sorry, but I can´t undestand your point of view. |
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11/19/2003 12:09:48 AM |
| OK, maybe I'm just a perv, but I think you did this intentionally...GOOD JOB |
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11/18/2003 10:38:52 PM |
| Perhaps it is me but I don't understand what you are trying to say with this photo. I like the negative space a lot. It is a pity the focus is a bit off. |
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11/18/2003 07:16:29 PM |
| Um, was this for the literalism challenge? Out of focus, non-interesting composition. 4 -danny |
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