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11/24/2003 09:02:32 PM |
| Ha..well the border may be a bit distracting, as well as those things behind the horizontal bottle, but it surely gets it point across. Coulda used some blood and a severe burn mark or two though....just kidding. Thank you for not doing that. Good shot. |
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11/23/2003 10:25:44 AM |
| I get it. I like the concept. I want to see the green of those bottles. I do like the composition, but the sheet and blanket don;t look like the guy died in bed, not on a guerney or in a car. |
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11/22/2003 06:22:34 PM |
| I like the concept, but I think the keys are too hidden. Showing the entire key would have had a bigger impact. |
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11/21/2003 05:37:29 PM |
| Not sure the capabilities of your camera, but did you try a portrait mode view looking at the underside of both feet, shallowish DOF and the beer bottles and keys on the bed in the foreground? Something that would look more like an ad compain and not a hodge podge of ideas. 5 -danny |
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11/20/2003 10:59:17 AM |
| Need show more the keys of the car. very good shoot and i like comp. |
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11/20/2003 08:46:51 AM |
| nice message. might be more effective with the foot hanging off the end of the bed (ala a stretcher) and the leg being totally covered by the sheet. |
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11/20/2003 06:00:56 AM |
| Clear message, clear attempt to influence thought and behaviour. Nice use of small detail rather than entire model. Good choice of B/W. |
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11/19/2003 10:43:03 PM |
| Great composition, the b&w works well. Might have been better with a smaller border, but not enough to matter. |
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11/19/2003 12:11:12 PM |
| A bit of blood would have helped too. Nice interpretation and shot. |
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11/19/2003 06:48:34 AM |
| The idea is great but the POV could be improved a lot. I think the best thing would be to take a photo from the sole of your foot together with the empty bottles and maybe the car keys. |
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11/19/2003 06:36:41 AM |
| Nice idea but your car key is obscured. |
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11/19/2003 05:50:21 AM |
| Good use of B&W. But it looks like it was taken on a bed instead of a morgue gurney. |
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11/19/2003 12:00:01 AM |
| Good anti alchool propaganda. |
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