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12/02/2003 01:26:30 AM |
Hi, I will be your Critique Clubber this week.
I donât quite agree with the critique below that considers this image uninteresting. This is altogether quite intriguing. Probably shows my ignorance but I have no idea what this baroque object is all about. Is it children equipment? Fairy gear of some kind? Hairpin? A ballroom dagger?
The composition is harmonious but I personally would not encourage the tonal choice you made.
âDon't forget to leave your tooth under your pillow for the toothfairy...â probably lacks of the minimum brutality a slogan does require.
Had a look on you portfolio, you have a good sense of composition and seem to have mastered the technical side of things quite well. My advice to you would be to start worrying a little less on the aesthetic aspect but make yourself a point of allways telling a story with your photographs. Try also introducing more physical humanity in your images. This is maybe not the direction you want to go but I am sure this would make you progress.
All the best, JJ
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11/20/2003 08:43:25 AM |
| i don't understand what this is supposed to be a photo of, even with the title. |
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11/19/2003 05:34:30 PM |
| You mean........There is NO toothfairy? |
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11/18/2003 07:27:26 PM |
| Why the purple cast? Does it make it a stronger image? Are you trying to convey night time? Overall this is a soft shot, lacking in interest for the viewer. 4 -danny |
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