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04/23/2007 02:52:07 AM |
congratulations on a great shot and an excellent score .... MAD !!!!!!!!! |
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03/05/2007 06:21:54 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
Starting with a string idea like this you can't go too wrong and your score shows that's the case.
Composition: The composition is good and the way your wife is bending over the toilet like that helps all the lines in the image point towards the bowl. There is a "thing" poking into the frame on the left that you should have moved if it is something that can be moved.
Technical: The B&W conversion is good. The border works well. The lighting is a bit harsh, especially on the cleaning products above the loo. That's really the only major criticism I can find.
Feeling: Here's where the fun comes in. The expression on your wife's face is classic for the image. The duck, well who doesn't like a rubber duck - why he's in the loo I don't want to know! The paper is a good touch too!
PM me if you have any questions. |
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03/03/2007 11:50:22 PM |
Great job! Love your wife's expression! Congrats on a top ten! |
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02/28/2007 04:41:07 AM |
This is SO CUTE! I love the sweet little friendship plaque in the background to add such irony to the photo! Great job.
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02/27/2007 11:33:00 PM |
:P Reminds me of my four months stay in the USA. Toilets are designed completely different there you know. (Seriously!) In general, I think the design is probably better -- especially those turbo-charged public versions. But it also leads to the inevitable need for that damned plunger at least once a month it seems -- or perhaps I just need more practice!
Here (New Zealand), unless a toddler tries to flush Mr. Teddy or something, blockages simply don't occur. I know no one who owns their own plunger! Yup -- a blocked toilet is a serious matter in these parts! :) Instead, what we get -- and, really only the numorous more poor versions of the design (like my mother's one for EG.) -- is stuff that just wont go down at all without a helping, umm, stick or brush! And *I* HATE that! *sigh* TMI? :P
Oh... nice photo. Love the pose. The harsh light and high contrast works well for the topic. Well done! |
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02/26/2007 07:11:20 PM |
I tend to agree with this pic. |
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02/26/2007 08:24:21 AM |
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02/25/2007 06:45:02 PM |
great b and w with excellent light and clarity...hope this does well for you |
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02/24/2007 09:31:01 AM |
If you would leave the seat up, this wouldn't be necessary :) |
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02/23/2007 08:33:21 AM |
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02/23/2007 06:57:46 AM |
And I can see why! A little bit of fill flash to reduce the shadows may have helped a bit. Overall very nice. |
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02/22/2007 04:41:51 PM |
Oh, I so totally get this!! The worst possible chore EVER! :-) This is great, love the look, the tones and all the little details. Bumping up. |
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02/22/2007 04:34:25 PM |
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02/22/2007 03:39:51 PM |
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02/22/2007 09:47:43 AM |
This is great. Love the expression and the little details like the stitch sampler above the toilet. |
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02/22/2007 03:06:19 AM |
a 10 from me and HOPEFULLY a Ribbon for you!! Really captures the essence of hate in my world! Well done! |
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02/21/2007 07:12:48 PM |
Haha! a true mother! love the photo! Stupid love/hate relationship with the toilet. lol |
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02/21/2007 11:03:35 AM |
10. Here is the story of my life!!!! The rubber ducky really was a nice touch...haha! |
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02/21/2007 05:37:08 AM |
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