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05/03/2007 03:39:57 AM |
this is great shot! the tones are great & the composition |
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05/03/2007 01:21:03 AM |
Great lighting on the subject, very clear and sharp too |
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03/05/2007 10:55:40 AM |
Oh! Love those hot, hot colors. And nice score too. |
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02/24/2007 06:41:13 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
compositionally, you have a very strong picture here. It is "anchored" in the front, bottom third, and this gives the eyes some where to rest when initially viewing the picture. The stems sticking up, then lead the eyes up into the frame.
Technically, the focus is razor sharp on the water and that is good because if they were the least bit off, it would really be noticeable. The shallow dof is good to emphasize the clarity of the front fruit. The exposure and the colors are nice as well.
Overall, you have an excellent shot. While I can't really offer you any advice on how to improve it, I do hope that telling what works in it helps in some way. Please feel free to contact me if i need to further clarify or explain anything.
karmat |
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02/19/2007 04:33:05 AM |
Why the 1 and the 3's. Honestly a superb shot, even if it was close to the shallow DOF challenge, it met the challenge, and you captured the shot again very well. Well done and nice finish. |
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02/18/2007 10:32:00 AM |
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02/17/2007 11:05:01 PM |
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02/17/2007 02:33:27 AM |
something distracting about the spots of water, less would have been best, omo. |
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02/15/2007 05:24:01 PM |
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02/15/2007 04:09:57 PM |
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02/15/2007 02:12:07 AM |
best of the apples - inventive composition - great tones and dof -- one of my favorites this challenge |
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02/15/2007 12:00:37 AM |
like the composition, the colors and the lighting! Well done! - Giorgio? |
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02/14/2007 04:53:14 AM |
Lovely shot -- nice shallow DOF and the colors are yummy! |
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02/13/2007 04:04:04 AM |
Hmmm, this is very similar to style of one of the current ribbon winners on the front page...nonetheless this composition is a wonderful piece of technical work and imagery. Lighting is wonderful and the color tones are nice warm reds and yellows. Love the water beads on the apple - focus & clarity is execellent and sharp so we can bite into (sorry for the pun, just had too:-) ) all the lovely details of the photo. And as an added visual uniqueness this apple has not one, but two stems! That adds to the visual interest of this composition. Nicely done this scores in the exceptional category! |
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02/13/2007 03:48:13 AM |
I like what this suggests; it makes me muse. |
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02/12/2007 08:51:02 AM |
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02/12/2007 05:10:26 AM |
nice use of macro here - the drops of water add just the right amount of highlights to this image. |
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02/12/2007 04:11:10 AM |
That's interesting. I rather like it. Even if it's contrived, it looks believable. I wonder what it would look like if the overall tones weren't quite so yellow. Hmmm - just thinking out loud. 7 |
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02/12/2007 04:00:49 AM |
reminds me much of Giorgio... very nice |
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02/11/2007 10:10:06 PM |
Love the bg...has to be Giorgio right? awesome image 9 |
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