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02/20/2007 10:14:53 PM |
Critique Club Comment
To start off I want to say that I love the way you composed this shot.
I do not like that you can see her finger poke out underneath the pepper. I would prefer that it be better lit or removed completely.
It looks like your white sheet has a few wrinkles in the bottom right corner. This could be fixed.
Her head needs to be lit a little better so that there is not such a large area of lost detail where it gets too dark.
I am not sure what your title means. Until I recently looked at it more carefully I thought it said "Ridiculous". It thought it was great because it is ridiculous for someone to eat a red pepper like that. Are you joining the words "Red" and "Delicious"? |
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02/17/2007 09:47:58 PM |
| Very nicely done, I like the shadows in the back.. |
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02/17/2007 05:08:14 PM |
| Nice photo. I would have prefered the lighting on the face to be a little more subtle but all in all a good picture. |
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02/12/2007 07:18:39 AM |
| Good lighting on the background, but the foreground lighting needs more diffusion. |
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02/12/2007 07:17:42 AM |
| This CANNOT be Annah... mind you it might be, prefered the pear to be honest |
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02/12/2007 05:48:06 AM |
congratulations - this photograph contains a fruit and/or a vegetable, therefore it meets the challenge! well done!
nice composition. to make a suggestion, i'd have asked her to pull the shirt below her shoulders. i think the shirt is a negative element. but good shot though! 8! |
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02/11/2007 09:25:45 PM |
| Hey! Wait til yer 18 to do that! ;-) j/k... Great tonal balance, clarity, sparkle, and a very beautiful model. |
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