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11/17/2003 09:17:20 PM |
I like the negative space on this one, why is the needle bent on the edge? |
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11/17/2003 08:07:22 AM |
The very low contrast here doesn't help - it seems to be all midtones, no whites, no blacks. Composition is odd - why crop out the end of the needle? Such very simple subjects almost always rely on great technical work for their impact: try having a careful look at the impact of more directional lighting - this seems to be absolutely flat light - like in an office, or showroom. There's no shadows at all, no depth, texture. |
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11/17/2003 06:59:38 AM |
Nice depth of field in this photo. I would have cropped out the part where the needle starts to curve... maybe it's just me, but it distracts me because my brain expects to see a straight needle, and then this one curves all of the sudden. 8 |
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11/16/2003 03:50:50 AM |
photo seems a bit dark, also I don't care much for the textured surface the items are sitting on. |
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11/15/2003 05:27:45 PM |
This is a popular title. Wasn't the phrase easier for a camel to pass...meaning an actual pass between two mountains? any way, good choice of b and w. |
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11/14/2003 08:31:28 PM |
A good shot and a good book. Great clarity on the thimble and the needle. Good job. |
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11/14/2003 09:42:09 AM |
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11/14/2003 06:01:25 AM |
adjusting the curves to brighten this one up a little would help |
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11/13/2003 12:42:56 PM |
Good on topic shot. Just Needs a bit more contrast. Also, why cut off the bottom of the needle? |
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11/12/2003 06:50:43 PM |
I really like the needle. Looks old, the thimble I don't like and I don't know why. |
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11/12/2003 03:55:20 PM |
I like the composition, though I'd like to have seen a little more reflection from these metal objects. Also you might have wanted to crop a little off of the right. the curve of the neddle is a little distracting. |
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11/12/2003 01:37:29 AM |
needs better lighting, more contrast |
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