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02/19/2007 06:16:08 PM |
*Critique Club*
"Seberity" is a great first attempt at the challenges here at DPC. It is amazing the amount you learn by entering these challenges, and you have taken the hardest step in my opinion by putting your first piece out there.
I think you have an excellent subject here. This looks like an extremely peaceful place to relax. I think the very best thing you did with this piece was to frame up the shot with the tree and branches. The focus seems little soft, maybe you were trying to minimize the movement in the water. I think for my vote personally, I would have probably voted higher if there was more focus on one point. Also I would be really curious to see this shot from ground, more of an angle that makes the trees look over powering.
Overall this was a nice first entry I look forward to your future entries.
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02/13/2007 05:51:59 AM |
| this image seems a little out of focus, but i love the scenery in the shot. maybe making this clearer would clean it up and make your image a lot stronger. its good tho, nice job. |
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02/11/2007 02:10:56 AM |
| This is a beautiful spot: I think you could have processed this a bit to make it more intriguing - more contrast and maybe bring out the yellows in Color Balance..? |
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02/10/2007 06:25:53 PM |
| is this a scan from a newspaper? What is this picture about? |
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02/10/2007 12:10:09 AM |
| A nice composition, but let down by overly soft focus; did you use any USM prior to saving for web? The title has lost me, I'm afraid. |
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02/09/2007 04:03:46 PM |
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02/09/2007 02:40:01 PM |
| photo needs sharpness and there is no real focal point. try stepping to the left or right a little to see if it adds more interest to the shot. |
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02/09/2007 09:43:43 AM |
| it could have been a nice picture really |
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02/08/2007 02:37:07 PM |
| This has a tilted feeling to it but I like how you used the branches to frame the shot. |
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02/08/2007 07:09:58 AM |
| i like the design an layout of the picture theres a lot going on but it is nicely layed out |
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02/08/2007 06:26:50 AM |
| nice image, very serine and tranquil. |
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02/07/2007 05:59:04 PM |
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