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11/24/2003 06:27:11 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is a very dramatic image. The backlit clouds have a wonderful shadowy texture that shows very well here. The bright, featureless moon adds the final touch that gives the intended occult feeling suggested by the title. The softness and noise add mystery. The composition works well; the dark cloud at the left is balanced by the moon being just to the right of center. A "rule of thirds" composition would have made a lovely photo, but the nearly centered moon gives this image more drama.
The photo does have some minor weaknesses. The dark cloud at bottom left is blotchy; it might be improved with a slight contrast adjustment (or Curves could give even more control). The border is a bit too much; just the black outside border would have enough, but the white distracts from the moon's brightness. |
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11/17/2003 11:42:19 AM |
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11/16/2003 06:31:23 AM |
Very eerie and beautiful shot. |
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11/16/2003 04:43:29 AM |
This does feel like it is from "The Witching Hour". I love the way the clouds look in this. |
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11/16/2003 04:22:22 AM |
Love the dark mysterious clouds. Nice shot 8 |
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11/15/2003 09:26:32 AM |
Very spooky, title suits it perfectly, great capture ( 8 ) |
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11/13/2003 06:04:28 PM |
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11/13/2003 04:22:21 PM |
I like it very much. Maybe you could have got rid of some noise but what do I know? |
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11/12/2003 01:57:28 PM |
Moons a little hot, but probably a trade off. very interesting. |
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11/12/2003 06:31:55 AM |
Ooooh. One of my favorite books of all time. Great photo. I guess I'm a little biased because of the book, but I really like this imagery for the title. |
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11/12/2003 06:18:23 AM |
Although this is a great shot I think it could be better brought the exposure down a stop or two so we could see the moon a bit more clearly. Remember the moon is light by full sunlight and sunny f16 can apply durning full moons. 7 |
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11/12/2003 04:48:40 AM |
OK, but at least on stop over exposed. The moon is hard to photograph. I know... I've burned so much film trying to get it right myself! ;-) |
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11/12/2003 04:39:57 AM |
This is interesting photo, well done. I think may be if you play with cropping you may get even better view and more attractive picture. I guess rule of third will do the work for you. But it̢۪s anyway great. |
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11/12/2003 03:50:30 AM |
I love the light and the shadows and the colors. Great capture |
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11/12/2003 03:46:36 AM |
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